Liz Ohtar

Liz Ohtar
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Liz Ohtar Sept 24, 2006 16:45:36 GMT -5

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Post by Liz Ohtar on Sept 24, 2006 16:45:36 GMT -5

Name: Liz Ohtar

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Clothes: Causal : A white tank and blue jeans
Armor: mostly leather

Hair:Blond

Eyes: Blue

Past: Orcs Killed my parents and i ran away to my granddad.And i grow up with him

Side: Free People

Race: Elf

Birth place: Mirkwood

weapons: Bow and arrow and duel blade (2 long swords)

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Liz Ohtar Sept 24, 2006 16:51:15 GMT -5

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Post by Lord Taylor on Sept 24, 2006 16:51:15 GMT -5

ok, now to work. First there wern't tank tops and jeans in middle earth. Secondly expand on your past what happend in your life with your grandfather? how old were you when your parents died? Put detail into it, this is your characters life you know all about them. ANd also put it in 3rd person

Fate is unavoidable, no matter what you do it will come to be

jenna Moderator The Real Deal Posts: 138	Liz Ohtar Sept 25, 2006 7:49:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jenna on Sept 25, 2006 7:49:02 GMT -5 ...isnt a 17 year old elf like a toddler?

Lord Taylor Administrator THE BRAVE My sword is yours, ask me to, and I shall fight with you untill the end. Posts: 286	Liz Ohtar Sept 25, 2006 14:52:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lord Taylor on Sept 25, 2006 14:52:15 GMT -5 well ya their still considerd childeren
	Fate is unavoidable, no matter what you do it will come to be

Post by Liz Ohtar on Sept 24, 2006 16:45:36 GMT -5

Post by Lord Taylor on Sept 24, 2006 16:51:15 GMT -5

Post by jenna on Sept 25, 2006 7:49:02 GMT -5

Post by Lord Taylor on Sept 25, 2006 14:52:15 GMT -5

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